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Dear Alex,

Thanks for sending us your update resume, our boss is interested in your background, but it looks too simple.

Because you look at the JD for IT Project Leader-Banking System Interfaces Development, project leader covers many aspects of the system development life cycle from funation req study, to specification, development, test, and implementation etc.. and also mentioned specifically in the JD was middleware / messaging software, which you cannot see much ofg all mentioned above in your CV.

If you are interested in this position with those working experience, could you pls update your
CV again or let's make a time to talk again.

Looking forward to hear from you soon, so that we can send out your CV to client these two day.

Thanks & Best Regards,

Cherry Yang
Brand Manager
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Hi Cherry,

Please accept my apologize for delaying - actually I didn't check gmail for the last weekend. Please then find the updated stuff as attached.
You can probably see I didn't add too much stuff there, except for some lines emphasising the end-to-end project involvement, and naming some detail of the techniques. However, I chose not to bomb the audience with all terminologies or software development specific terms, because that what the amateurs often do. I believe the domain and industry experts would appreciate the simple approach - essentially business is the first, not the technology we choose to implement it.

Thanks and kindly let me know if you need more information from me.
Alex