What is your major point, just make your point across with so many excuses and expectations?

That is not good la.

To be understanding western culture, The major of personality should be Honest and straitforward. but anyway your quiting letter seems a little untidy with so much reasons and excuse.
what you talked in your letter, like your excuses, your wishes, somehow the western people could consider you as childish man since all of these r related to your privacy.